Saturday, 4 March 2017

Metaphor poems

Here is a selection from our LS1 students, aged just 10 to 12.  I’m astounded by the maturity of their writing, with phrases such as “My life is a tunnel, where there are dark moments”, or "My family are oceans, they swallow attackers up for me." Wow!


My Life
My life is a journey,
every day is a new place.

My life is a lesson,
where I learn as I grow.

My life is a party,
having fun and being happy.

My life is a tunnel,
where there are dark moments.

My life is an ocean,
with hard tasks.

My life is a jungle,
where there are dangers to face.

My life is a road,
with an end.
(Ng KT)


Family
My family are blankets,
they keep me warm when I’m cold.

My family are warriors,
they keep me safe all the time.

My family are mice,
they keep quiet when I’m ugly in my heart.

My family are homes,
they always welcome me back to their hugs.

My family are lights,
they guide me through the darkness.

My family are forests,
they’re camouflaged so that enemies won’t see me.

My family are oceans,
they swallow attackers up for me.
(Soh SS)


My Computer Poem

My computer is a computer,
but it is so much more.

My computer is an arcade,
where I can play games.

My computer is a dictionary,
where I can find information.

My computer is a cinema,
where I can watch a movie.

My computer is a map,
shows me how the earth looks.

My computer is a newspaper,
shows me what happened these days.

My computer is a friend,
it gives me a lot of benefits.
(Lim JX)